Delaware St. John pre-Kickstarter feedback requested

Here is a work-in-progress of the new campaign. It is not live. You'll notice it's set up for an extremely minimal $10,000 budget with stretch goals to build from there. Please take a moment and read it over and leave feedback. The goal of this campaign is to raise the money to develop the game without getting into frivolous extras that only inflate the budget and detract from the actual development of the game. Link to campaign

Welcome to the Drake Institute for the Mentally Ill. You won't be checking out if the spirits that reside here have any say. Join psychic Delaware St. John and paranormal investigator Kelly Bradford in this first-person point and click adventure as they explore the rotting remains of an old mental asylum with a deeper, darker secret than either have ever encountered before.

After a heated altercation leads Kelly to investigate the abandoned building on her own, Delaware has a horrifying vision that she's in great danger. He immediately goes to the asylum knowing it's a trap, but he has no choice. He must find Kelly before it's too late.